MArcomage

Great card effect and great theme choice. I'm not sure how happy DOTA 2 developers would be with the copyright infringement, but MArcomage is a small-scale game. They might not care.

Just fix the grammar and the format(the same stands for the other two). Put a dot after Skirmisher, capitalize Stifling, delete the colon after dagger, and 'else' should be lower case. To post in forums as you do is fine. Card concepts with a better layout will be looked at more often.

I would be more inclined to some fixed "if" condition than percentage chance of triggering the effect, nevertheless its inovative approach as far as I know (not sure about older concepts and discusions)

the old Mortred had a 10% chance to trigger now its a condition card which way do you guys like it more ?

since this card has skirmisher keyword it seems that condition "skirmisher >1" is redundant for triggering 45 damage (you need Mortred to trigger that and that means you also got needed skirmisher) if I understand that correctly
and as you want to have two of this for which purpose you can use some summoning or replacing cards (Magic door, Reinforcements, Mask of phantasm, ...) i think you still need pretty good luck to get to this situation :), but its ok and I feel better about this because I know what result will bring playing this card, but just my opinion maybe someone would appreciate more percentage chance of triggering :)

The random added more character. And how would you have double Mortred in hand?o.o There is a cumulative chance reduction for each card in your hand to draw the same card. Perhaps increase the chance to deal higher damage. The original has a 15% chance, give her the same treatment:3

At its current state now requires 2 Skirmisher so is it this OR 10% maybe 15%? chance for 45 Attack

So it now reads:

Mortred, Uncommon 16r
Skirmisher.
if Mortred>1 and Skirmisher>2 attack:45
else
Attack:10


First of all, it should be reworded this way for consistency and brevity:

Attack: 10
if Mortred>1 and Skirmisher>2 Attack: 35


Second, are you looking for the number of Mortred and Skirmishers in hand, or in game? You need to specify.